Ben Raterman, Author

A new novel
Speak to Me
April Gloaming Publishing

When asked to find the house where a maid worked over a hundred years ago, Katy is intrigued. Justine and Joseph tell her that their third-great-grandmother Jannie’s jewelry is in the house. These jewels, the kids hope, will help buy them out of their life in a rundown trailer park with their negligent mother and her abusive boyfriend.
Katy searches and finds the address of the house. Curious, she visits the house, and an old woman invites her in to have tea, only to make her wonder later if she was conversing with a dead woman.
Justine and Joseph scope the house and break in. What they find beneath the dirt floor has no luster. Bone is its color and its substance.
Uncovering century-old secrets, these three searchers reveal long-hidden family truths. It is as if Jannie has reached into the present to influence the future lives of all those involved.

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Reviews
Virginia Writers Project, Spring 2026
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Reviewed by John Nicolay
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Ben Raterman’s Speak to Me is a quietly ambitious novel that operates on several narrative registers at once: a children’s quest story, a social realist portrait of generational poverty, a historical mystery, and a meditation on storytelling itself—who is allowed to tell stories, who preserves them, and who is erased by silence. What gives the novel its distinctive power is not plot velocity but accretion: meaning gathers gradually through parallel lives, layered timeframes, and the
porous boundary between fact and imagination. By the midpoint of the book, Speak to Me is less about buried
jewels than about buried voices.
At the emotional core of the novel are Justine and Joseph, siblings whose determination and ingenuity provide the novel’s forward motion. Justine, at eight years old, is one of the more fully realized child protagonists in recent literary fiction. She is not precocious in a sentimental sense, but shaped by necessity: she reads adults astutely, understands institutional power (particularly the threat posed by police), and possesses a moral logic that is coherent even when legally naive. Her desire to find Nonna Jannie’s jewels is not driven by greed but by architectural longing—the need for a house that locks, walls that hold, and rooms that provide privacy and safety. In this way, Justine’s “treasure hunt” is really a search for structural stability.
Joseph, younger and more physically expressive, serves as contrast and ballast. Where Justine plans and narrates, Joseph observes and responds. He is drawn to physical detail—bridges, buildings, windows—and often functions as the
novel’s sensory register. His statements are occasionally blunt, even disruptive, but they consistently cut to emotional truths the adults evade. Together, the children form a unit of trust and shared purpose that stands in quiet opposition to the
instability of their home life.
The adult figures orbiting the children are drawn with notable restraint. Rachelle, their mother, is neither villain nor mere victim. Her poor choices—particularly her attachment to Terrell and her normalization of chaos—are rendered without authorial condescension. The novel’s most incisive social critique emerges through Nonna Etta, who recognizes poverty not simply as material deprivation but as inherited constraint: “penury, absence, inferiority... poverty of
imagination.” Etta’s self-reproach is one of the novel’s most devastating moments, suggesting how structural harm is internalized as personal failure.
Equally important is Katy Aldridge, whose storyline expands the novel’s scope beyond the children’s immediate world. Katy is a librarian, archivist, and reluctant fiction-maker—someone who exists between documentary fact and
imaginative reconstruction. Through her, Raterman introduces the question that ultimately governs the novel: when the archive is incomplete, is it better to invent or to remain silent? Katy’s loneliness and sense of stasis mirror the children’s
precarity in a different register, linking intellectual isolation with economic and familial instability.
On the surface, Speak to Me adopts a familiar narrative engine: children set out to recover a lost object that promises transformation. Yet Raterman complicates this structure by dispersing the story across multiple temporal and epistemological planes. The children’s present-day journey unfolds alongside Katy’s archival investigations, which in turn give rise to imagined reconstructions of early-twentieth-century lives—Anna Fitzhugh, Kate Aldridge (namesake and possible double), and Jannie Pratt.
Rather than treating these strands as separate plots, the novel allows them to bleed into one another. Katy’s act of fictional reconstruction is not framed as invention versus truth, but as a necessary response to historical absence—particularly the absence of working-class women and Black labor from official records. The jewels, long assumed to be stolen or lost, become symbolic nodes where class, race, memory, and desire intersect.
The novel’s pacing is deliberately measured. Scenes in the library basement, the trailer park, and the Fitzhugh house are extended and observational, resisting thriller-style acceleration. This restraint is a strength. By slowing the reader down,
Raterman ensures that discoveries feel earned rather than contrived. The narrative tension derives not from whether the children will succeed, but from what success would cost them ethically, legally, and emotionally.
Importantly, Speak to Me avoids the false closure common to quest narratives. Even as plans are made and risks escalate, certainties dissolve. The line between inheritance and appropriation, between justice and transgression, remains
unsettled. In this way, the novel honors its thematic commitment to ambiguity and listening rather than resolution.
The greatest strength of Speak to Me lies in its moral seriousness without moralizing. Raterman trusts the reader to sit with uncertainty. The book does not offer rescue fantasies—neither the children nor Katy are “saved” by discovery alone.
Instead, the novel insists that attention itself is an ethical act: listening to children, to under-documented women, to fragments of lives dismissed as inconsequential.
Stylistically, the prose is lucid and unshowy, often slipping into lyric observation without drawing attention to itself. Natural imagery—woods, rivers, old houses—functions not as metaphor overload but as connective tissue between time
periods. The embedded historical fictions Katy writes inside the novel serve a dual purpose: they advance the mystery while also modeling how narrative fills archival silence. Rather than undermining the novel’s realism, these passages deepen it by acknowledging that history itself is already a form of storytelling.
If there is a risk in the novel, it is structural: readers seeking clear genre boundaries may find the layering disorienting. Yet this instability mirrors the lives the novel depicts. To impose neatness would be dishonest.
Speak to Me is a thoughtful, socially attuned novel that understands storytelling as both inheritance and responsibility. Its principal characters—especially Justine—are rendered with psychological precision and moral weight. Its narrative arc resists easy payoff in favor of convergence and resonance. Most impressively, the novel argues—quietly but insistently—that voices require listeners, and that listening is an act of care.
In a literary landscape crowded with spectacle, Speak to Me distinguishes itself by attending to what is small, overlooked, and unfinished—and by trusting that such attention is enough to carry a story.
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Synopsis: Step into the enchanting world of Caroline Street, where history whispers through the walls of a 200-year-old house that has seen generations come and go. As you cross the threshold, the air is thick with stories waiting to be uncovered. A friendly realtor may greet you, eager to share the home's rich legacy, but if you take a different path through the rear door, you might find yourself amid a thrilling adventure. Here, amidst the wild embrace of an overgrown garden, a ghostly presence, the former mistress of the house welcomes you with an ethereal smile, inviting you to explore the echoes of her past. The importance of the house's history will make you feel deeply connected to the narrative.
Imagine the curiosity of young Justine and Joseph, descendants of the house's long-ago maid, Jannie. With hopeful hearts, they approach Katy, a local historian, filled with dreams of unearthing hidden treasures; jewelry said to be enough to lift them from their trailer park existence. Their plight resonates deeply, an echo of the universal quest for a better life and the longing for connection to one's roots. As they crawl through a cellar window, their adventure takes a dramatic turn when they stumble upon a skeleton buried beneath the dirt floor, sparking intrigue beyond mere riches. Their emotional journey will resonate with you, evoking a sense of empathy and understanding.
Captivated by the mystery, Katy dives into the rich tapestry of the house's history, revealing secrets that time had cloaked in shadows. With the sudden appearance of a diary on her laptop, the story unfolds further, intertwining past and present lives. This journey is not just about material wealth; it's a heartfelt exploration of family, heritage, and the unbreakable bonds that tie us to our ancestors.
Critique: Speak To Me threads of mystery, love, and the relentless pursuit of justice intertwine to create a tapestry rich in emotional depth and intrigue. This captivating tale unfolds against the backdrop of a century's worth of family strife, lost jewelry, and the powerful bonds that unite seekers of both jewels and justice. As we delve into the lives of the characters, we find ourselves not just witnessing their journey, but feeling the weight of their struggles and triumphs.
Ben Raterman is an exceptional author. In this beautifully woven narrative, figures from the past, reaches across time to influence the present, reminding us that the echoes of our history shape our future.
The characters' emotions run deep as love blossoms amidst chaos, and redemption is sought by unraveling long-held secrets. This story is more than just a quest; it's a heartfelt exploration of the connections we forge with one another, even when faced with the most daunting challenges. The resilience of the characters will inspire you to remember their heartfelt past challenges and embrace their stories for future generations to enjoy.
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Reviewed by Nino Lobiladze for Readers' Favorite
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In Ben Raterman's Speak to Me, eight-year-old Justine dreamt of leaving the trailer park where she lived with her mother, Rachel, or Rachelle, and her six-year-old brother, Joseph. Justine and Joseph hoped to find and sell their ancestor Jannie Thomas's jewelry to buy a house. Jannie was Anna Fitzhugh's maid in the early 1900s. What if Anna gave Jannie a piece of jewelry from her collection as a gift? At least, that was what Nonna Etta told her grandchildren, Justine and Joseph. According to a dark rumor, Anna was robbed and killed. Yet Justine believed the jewelry was still somewhere in Anna's old house. The children befriended Katy Aldridge, a librarian passionate about history and the stories of those who lived long ago. Katy's research led to mystifying occurrences. Justine, Joseph, and two neighbor boys, Shahin and Hauk, made a scary discovery.
Speak to Me by Ben Raterman is an engrossing read for mature fans of mystery, literary and Southern fiction, adventure, and social issues novels. The author paints a believable picture of social injustice in a small town in Virginia and realistically portrays hardworking African Americans who refuse to give up hope. They face the challenges the racist part of society throws their way with integrity and courage, like an old gardener named Douglas Freeman, who loves nature tremendously and has a strong work ethic. Justine is only eight, yet she seems older. This wise, brilliant child can see through people. Justine recognizes a wounded soul in a bully and bravely opens up to an unexpected friendship. The narrative, with an intriguing touch of magical realism, is well-paced. Raterman has a unique approach toward storytelling, and an attentive reader will appreciate this thrilling search for a true treasure.
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An entertaining blend of mystery, adventure, and heartfelt introspection…
Raterman’s debut is a compelling tale that draws readers into a world where hidden jewels and buried secrets hold the key to unlocking the mysteries of the past. Justine and Joseph, struggling to survive in their rundown trailer park with their negligent mother and abusive stepfather, turn to their 3rd-great-grandmother, Nonna Jannie, for salvation. Jannie worked for a wealthy woman who mysteriously vanished, leaving behind a trove of precious jewels. With the help of Katy, a kind-hearted librarian, the siblings track down the old mansion where Jannie once served and sneak inside. Instead of priceless gems, they uncover something far more sinister – a skeleton. As they dig deeper, they realize that there may be more at play than just a simple case of theft.
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Raterman’s characterization is excellent: Joseph, impetuous and daring, is driven by instinct and a thirst for adventure. In contrast, Justine is reserved and contemplative who approaches challenges with caution and intellect. Their contrasting personalities complement each other, creating a dynamic duo that navigates the complexities of their family history with a blend of daring adventure and thoughtful reflection. Katy grapples with personal struggles while trying to aid the siblings, ultimately finding purpose in guiding them. The enigmatic Jannie Thomas holds the key to unraveling a central conflict, as her secrets and choices impact future generations. The supporting characters, like Nonna Etta and Rachel, bring their own complexities to the story. The novel unfolds through a third-person omniscient perspective, allowing readers to gain insights into the thoughts, emotions, and motivations of multiple characters, particularly the siblings duo.
The pacing is deliberate: Raterman skillfully balances moments of action and discovery with quieter, reflective scenes, creating a rhythm that keeps readers engaged and invested in the unfolding mystery. He is skilled when it comes to creating a tangible sense of place and mood. The novel’s language is evocative, bringing each location to life, while the incorporation of historical context and cultural references adds depth and authenticity, transporting readers to a specific time and place. The ending is both satisfying and emotionally resonant. Throughout it all, the novel delves into the complex interconnectedness of ordinary individuals and the profound influence of their pasts on society’s grander tale while exploring themes of identity, memory, and the significance of personal narratives in shaping our understanding of the world around us. A compelling and heartfelt novel that will resonate with readers on a deep emotional level.
Reviewed by Penny A Parrish
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I am occasionally asked to read or review books for friends or local authors. My experience overall has not been very positive. I often find good story lines but ineffective writing. Or some great sentences but the plot never thickens. When writer Ben Raterman asked me to read his book, I told him I’d give it a try, but if it wasn’t a good fit, I’d quit after the first 30 pages. This book is 264 pages, and I read it to the very end.
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The book features two realistic and likable kids, eight-year-old Justine and her brother Joseph, age six. They live in a broken-down trailer in Fredericksburg with a neglectful mother who barely provides enough food and clothing for them. Making matters worse, mom has a nasty, manipulative boyfriend who drops in all the time.
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So, these kids rely on their grandmother Etta for love and comfort. It’s Etta who spins stories about her great-great grandmother Jannie and the missing jewels.
The precocious children wander to the library, where they meet Katy, a research librarian in the Virginiana Room. They ask her about a house where Jannie worked for a rich woman named Anna Fitzhugh on Main Street.
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She was married only a short time when she disappeared, and her collection of jewels was never found. Katy is able to track down the address of the house through maps and old newspaper clippings. With that information in hand, the children go on a mission to find the missing jewels they believe were given to Jannie by her rich employer.
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The cast of characters is reasonably small, and each is fleshed out nicely. Katy is a workaholic with little joy in her life. She sees this quest by the children as a personal mission, helping them whenever she can. To her, people are kept alive by bringing the past forward.
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Two of my favorite characters are the wonderful old couple Douglas and Helen Freeman. Douglas is a gardener on Main Street, now known as Caroline. He tends plants for the rich families with love and watches the kids as they look for answers at the old house.
Local readers will be able to picture the locations in their mind as they read, which makes this book even more interesting. For example, a dinner one night takes place at a restaurant where Katy and her friends sit in a vault.
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He also does not give the exact address of the house where Jannie worked, but he gives us the block on Caroline Street, letting us exercise our imagination as we drive past.
My only quibble with the book is when the author goes into detail about the Civil War battles in Fredericksburg. It just seems out of place.
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The author did his research, even going into the old house years ago. He spent years trying to find a publisher. Writing a book is one thing – getting it published is another. But he persisted and the end result will appeal not only to locals, but to anyone who finds the past and present intertwined.
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Penny A Parrish is a long-time book reviewer and artist. Learn more about her by visiting her page at Brush Strokes Gallery, which is in downtown Fredericksburg.


